Holy Paradise

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I don't know what category these songs should go under, so I just put'em here.


Decent, but not great

The kicks&claps , although consistent, seemed to be a little too spastic feeling, and didn't fit too well with the bass and the rest of the song. Not too bad though, keep it up.

The intro needs some fine tuning though :P

scorpinox responds:

Thanks. I shall try harder next time.

Nice use...

of FL studio, I got it recently, it good, isn't it, but well done, 4/5 :D

P.S if you didn't use FL Studio then O.K, still good XD

scorpinox responds:

Thanks. You're right! I did use FL Studio. Unfortunately, I only have the demo.


A few flaws with this song

1. The kicks were a tad bit too basic, to make them more unique, open up the master mixer, assign your kick to a channel, then put a techno pounder over it, play around with those until you get the desired sound.
2. The drums were a bit too repeatitive, and too basic, try switching them up a bit.
3. The melody, was overall too simple, a repeated through out the whole song, but
4. haha Claps dont go with every song/melody.

Granted i did see effort put into this so i'm giving you a 4/5
Pm me for some help on the basics if you need

Check out my stuff some time

scorpinox responds:

Thanks a lot! I will keep these list of flaws in mind, for they will help me on my next song. To be honest though, I kinda felt lazy when making this one. I only have a demo of FL Studio, so when I make a song, I must make haste with completing it before some bastard in my house closes the program. Very aggrivating. I'll check to see what you got. Again, thanks for the tips!

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2.68 / 5.00

Jul 22, 2007
11:30 AM EDT
File Info
2.8 MB
3 min 6 sec

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