Your brutal review.

It's too god damn loud. Right off the bat. You start so high in level you have nowhere to go.

Your compressor is pumping to your bass kick, each kick drags the level down. Multiband it, the pumping effect is horrible.

Tone wise it's fine, saws, sines, tri's. Melody is good. There is an interesting tune here if you took more time in balancing the mix. Lower all the levels. Thin the parts, pan.

Resolve the comp pump.

5 as always

To me the part you named "(pre)" was too short and (while by itself sounded cool) distracted me from the rest of the song... but by the second time I listened I got used to it (though I'd suggest making that part longer, at least twice as long as is now)
I found the melody of the "verse" more catchy than the "chorus" one... maybe it wasn't that memorable to me because you didn't change the lead instrument for the melody at any point (and that can became quite stale)
During the brigde/break, those notes felt meaningless and didn't add to anything overall

Everything else sounded perfectly fine, no complain nor noteworth comment
(JUST a warning that I know little about audio stuff like mixing or mastering so I can't help you with that... And my opinion is just an opinion of a stranger on the internet, if it added anything to you, good, otherwise don't worry about it)