Good, could perhaps have a bit more in it tho, sounds a bit empty.
hey this is pretty cool for your first little thing i really like it keep up the good work
lol I can hear the fruityloops samples and drum loop. Nice try if it's your first.
This was actually not bad for your fist track because i can see you tried with it so i gotta give you credit there, the piano was a litttle off next time take your time with it man and you will get it dont even worry about it, anyways keep it up sooner or later you will make a hit.