reminds of music from requiem for a Dream! i like this ....i checked the song out on your page ...good stuff man!!
Thanks! Right now, I'm trying to get a song on here that's way better than this song, but thanks for the feedback. "Convenience Store, Pt. 2" was an instrumental for a rap song I did. Check the "Remix Me" news on my page; I have acapellas and stuff if you want to try remixing it. It might even be on my website; I don't know. Thanks for the review!
ur steppin up big time!!! bless up. Check out my new joint "Clean Thoughts" ..dont mind the rating.. it got 1'd badly.. like da first 10mins i put it up there.. it went from a 5.00... to 2.50.. den lower lol, man i got hataz on me.
Thanks, man! I have another song coming soon (today or tomorrow, I don't know) that's way better than this song; it's got acoustic guitars and crap. It's actually done, but I just gotta listen to it 500 times to see what I can change or add to it. And a title; I haven't come up with a title yet, so that'll take a while. Song's about 5:17, and it really takes off at 2:44, when pianos and stuff come in, so listen to the whole thing. Just keep your eyes open. Peace.
U REALLY LIKED THIS ONE REALLY LIKE THE PIANO AND THAT KIND OF TRUMPET AND I DO HEAR THAT KIND OF DEEP DARK ORCHRESTRAL KIND OF SOUND IN THE BACKGROUND NICE SONG MAN! YOU EARNED THE 10 STARS!
Thanks for the feedback! I'm not sure which piano you were talking about (there was the Hammond 2 on Sytrus and then the quiet one was FL Keys) but the trumpet was a James Brown sample (using samples on NG? Super Bad!) I didn't use an orchestra, though - that kind of sound was either white noise (from my portable fan) a drone (another sample) or something else. . .
Actually, this song was originally a rap song with lyrics and vocals by my caucasian ass; I have a link to it in the author comments. I really appreciate the high marks - this song took 6 days to make, and it (so far) was well received. I'll try to do another hip hop song like this as soon as I can. Peace.
nice track man, you definetyl took this genre and molded it into what you wanted it to sound like, i think you did a good job keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback! Actually, this is one of the most positive reviews I have ever gotten, which is great since I spent 6 days working on this song. Call me cheapo, but I only used the FL Studio 7 demo on this song, which means I couldn't save it. So, I exported at least 1 GB of half-baked files and multi-tracks so I wouldn't have to worry about that. Oh, and if you listen carefully, you can hear all this weird stuff in the background, like some white noise, a drone, a horror "ghoul" sound, etc. I love doing that - putting subtle stuff in the songs that just make it sound alive, you know. No subliminal messages, though - at least not yet. Peace.
A little bit repetitive
It had a really nice sound to it, but it just dragged on in a few parts. A simple solution would be to change the drum and/or bass line in certain parts. Besides that, it was pretty good.
Good idea! I should change up the bassline and/or drums in a few parts. See, the track was originally designed for someone to rap to it, so as always I would get lazy with the melody. The bassline is just A-A-A-A and then G-G-G-G. I'll mix it up next time. Thanks for the feedback!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.