This is cool.

This is like hip hop, but drum & bass, too - which is dope. This is up there with Daedelus, before he got all whimsical and started sampling 1940s records (not that that's a bad thing). You should further define this, though; even with all this noise, all this going on, it still sounds blank. I gave it a 4, if that's cool with you.

Bland in the beginning.

I didn't really like it. I can't say what to improve on because I'm not into the music you make. Cheers