great song, i will consider your songs for all of my gd levels!

Ah another one who likes arps, used right they can be powerful! First thing I can tell you is check your timing, at 0:15 your arps are not in step. Also that lead that comes in at the same time is really ear piercing. Your melody needs some work, it's a little boring, repetitive, and at the same time a little hard to follow. 2:52 really sounds like you just copied and pasted, the transition is so jarring.