Like derp says,
The composition is great, but the mixing needs some work
Don't worry tho, you very well know im the same way
mixing neds improvment uwu
The mix sounds better this time. Still needs work on the transitions though. Looking forward to the track in progress!
You are getting very good with atmospheres!
However, the main Drop sounds very weak compared to the tension at the beginning and the ending.
If you want a more powerful Chorus, then first make sure that everything is well equalized (f.e.: Bass should be dominant in the lows and it should have less high end than usual, the guitar shouldn't overrun the highs, since there will be a piano playing there, The Kick and the Snare should be audible, etc.) and also well mixed (it takes practice, but you'll get it down eventually).
It isn't bad, but there is room for improvement. I recommend you to listen to other artists and literally analyze their tracks, so that you can get a better understanding of what you could add to your track.
Thank you for this review! The reason the kick and snare are so drowned out is because I mixed in reference to other tracks in the genre where the drums are more drowned out in the mix. But all the other stuff is very useful! And yeah I’m planning on spending some time analyzing other people’s work to better my mixes :)
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