Dude I’m working on a rap song wondering if you wanted to DJ?
Oof I spent a lot of time on this this song is probably one of my best works in a long time. Giving bad rates? Please tell my why so I can improve.
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Dude I’m working on a rap song wondering if you wanted to DJ?
It shows that you put a lot of time into this piece. The synth are really cool, especially around 1:28. I also like the middle part 0:53-1:10 because of the "kinda glitchy synth" and the drums which have a cool rhythm to it.
By far the biggest problem is the mixing and sound production. It sounds like a demo, a amazing demo with a lot of potential but still a demo. Big part probably because there is pretty much no bass throughout the track. Try listening to other house/EDM songs (even ones with high ratings on newgrounds) and then immidiatly listen to your song again. You should probably hear a difference. It´s a bit short with less than 2 min. length time as well.
Musically it sounds really awesome, kinda reminds me of Flume but production wise it is kinda rough.
I really hope that you´re remaking this track in the future with more experience in mixing.
Still a very cool track!
Thanks I’ll try my best to improve
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