Open Wings ~ M ~

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Open Wings ~ M ~

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Author Comments

I don't know what exactly to say about this...
love how it came out... almost angelic in nature.
please give feedback on what i could improve upon :))

specs;
DAW: LMMS.
BPM: 120.
Time SIg: 4/4
Genre(s): Cinematic, Epic, Classical, Ambient, Inspirational.
Time Spent: 10 hours.

If you would like to use this in Geometry Dash, then by all means! :)

Thank you for listening to this piece. I really do like it, and hope it means half as much to you as it means to me :)
if you are a really outstandingly kind person, and you wantd to leave a comment, i would be so happy ^^

Dedicated to a very special person, for inspiring me to make this.

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NoStereo

2019-10-14 00:08:48

I'm sorry but I don't like it :(

The bass was a good addition like some others have said. The voices sound a little stock. The song is very repetitive. And there isn't an overarching progression, no story that the song is telling me.

MRM3 responds:

Thank you for giving honest feedback!
I really do appreciate it ^^

jonnywes91

2019-10-03 00:25:05

Loved it! It was enjoyable to listen to and it had a fun tempo to it.

MRM3 responds:

Thank you so much!!
really does mean a lot to me <3

TheHelmetKid

2019-09-17 12:07:29

i really like this song, the beginning reminds me of a good old game called undertale :)

MRM3 responds:

Ouu thank you!
I'm glad it reminds you of undertale.. and I can only hope that that's a good thing o:
Thank you soso much for the reivew <3 😁😁

Quarl

2019-08-28 18:26:48

Woo, cool to hear you orchestrating. I love the melodic experiments you're pulling off. That square sounding bass was a nice element to mix into what I expected to be a plain old classical composition. Things sounded kind of baroque there at first and then that bass slides in <3 <3

Not gonna lie, 10 hours is a relatively short amount of time to put into something but this still came out sounding great. I got off to KrinnValKhristi's review. I see we all have that vibe. I can sit in front of my piano for hours and just release new ideas non stop... but none of it ever gets written down. Music can feel so in the moment. A melody disappears as quickly as it came but it feels so right to just hit the instrument. Then you sit in front of your computer and try to spit it out but the process is comparatively dull, repetitive, and boring.

I found a few decent tricks to speed up the process and generate more tunes but they can be a little unreliable or distasteful...

First, I like to open up old rsn files that sounded great, delete the notes and loops in the sequencer, then just recycle the bones. It's probably why I have such a distinct sound. Most likely I've been gutting the same rsn file for the last 15 years and never realized it. I try to change up the samples and tones but I must not be doing a good enough job. I'm so forking lazy. Just remember to Save As before you start changing things up so that the original song file doesn't get over written...

Second, if I can't make something decent in an hour I delete it. If you can force yourself to do that every day you'll have spent 30 hours that month starting a new track everyday. You don't need to delete the ones that have potential. I open random project files from 2012 or 2017 all the damn time. I forget about them. Digging through my folders can be a treasure hunt sometimes. A friend of mine recently showed me a track I burned to CD for him ages ago and I have no idea what file it is. I have never found it but I know I wrote it. I wish I knew what file it is...

MRM3 responds:

OH my goodness I had this whole response typed out yesterday, and I was sure I sent it, but apparently not, and my browser crashed for some reason and HRMPH >:#
This stuff happens to me Far too often.
First off. Thank you for the wonderful wonderful WONDERFUL review <3
The squarish bass... YAASSS i love how well it goes with this genre, it flows so well, and adds a separate level... mixing two vastly different realms in a magical inbetween!
Thank you for the review, the rate, and THE FAV, Q!!! :DDDD
10 hours isn't a whole lot to put into a song, I agree... it was spread over a few days, and after I had spent around 10 hours i realized that honestly there's not anything else i could do to make the song better for my tastes, and it was as perfect as I could get it. Eh, :shrug: sometimes things happen :P
And ouuuu thank you for the tipss!!! :DDD
As a result of numerous (3 to be exact) data losses, i have nothing from past oh about 3 months ago, so, going through old files is uh... kinda not an option :/ I wish it was tho, because i've wanted to remake old songs, and make use of little things i randomly made soo much.
And ouu forcing yourself to make little new ideas is a really good idea... develope it as much as you can in that short period and then move on.. sure will make coming back to it a possiblility!
yeah thanks a ton, Q!
^^