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my 1st attempt at a trance song...so reviews and suggestions would be nice!!!


This one is nice too man

quite good as per usual. Thanks for reviewing my track Aegis, if you could check out my latest- HarmonySyncFinal that'd be cool too. I was most impressed by Skyline- you and your collabs really nailed that one. very uplifting , catchy and original that one.

Keep up the great work man

Rev. again

Well I was almost finished my rev. to you and than my comp. crashed. Now I have to redo my entire rev. to you. Okay so a quicker summary. The beginning mellow part I'm not sure why you have it in this song. A buildup comes, but wasn't what I anticipated. At 1:30 the disco drums come in. I like it. Something I don't hear often in trance. (My personal experience) At 2:03 I like the boom and the gradual crescendo of the lead synth. I see that you intended to make the digital beeping the lead instrument by lowing the volume of the background stuff. Well a nice idea but leave the beeping as a side instrument or brief fx support. I like the bass going on. From 3:40 to end of the song, your transitions seem abrupt. Maybe slowly do a decrescendo of the drums instead of a quick cut out. Finally the bang at the very end of the song is a great way to finish, but it would have sounded better if you had the bang after the very last note was played.

Overall I like the diversity. Keeps me interested for the 4:15 long song. Needs a bit more order and maybe more energy. I'll give you a 5/5 vote only once and a 9/10 review. Bye for now

great but repetative

a bit slow, and repetative! that beeping thing gets anoying!

Nyth-Pinank responds:

I kinda see it getting repetitive. Thanks for the review man, appreciate it.

oh damn

wow this was really awosme man, sounds like real trance to me loved the different stages of the song, it had good progression and the sounds you used were awsome!


Nyth-Pinank responds:

I made it change a lot cause people tell me that this is repetitive so I tried to change that.
Thanks for the review man, appreciate it. <3

Melodic Zen

I love the intro.. I am way into that whole melodic zen downtempo stuff. Good work.

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4.31 / 5.00

Jul 19, 2007
12:20 AM EDT
File Info
3.4 MB
4 min 16 sec

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