My friend said to come check you out, so I am =D
The start, without your voice, actually has me pumped up. Sounds like a classical Hip Hop, because the drums are so quiet.
Your voice is alright. It sounds like it's electronic. I don't know how to explain. It's just... like... just so weird.
It's a good song. The end, your voice sounds normal.
I didn't really find all that much wrong with it. Good job man. Come check me out if you get a shot.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.