Hey man! Sorry for the slow response. I was doing some judging for a contest, so I had to prioritize that.
I like the vocal samples at the beginning and the kinda eerie ambiance. I don't speak French, so before I realized it was describing a boxing match I almost thought of a gladiator-like battle to the death. XD The beat at :11 has a groovy vibe with some quirky, fun sound design. The mix is loud and pretty clear, but the texture sounds a bit thin for long stretches of the piece. Sometimes, the vocals aren't as prominent in the mix as I'd like them to be. Perhaps you could try a bit more compression there. Also, the brass samples sound pretty fake. The mood changes pretty suddenly at the breakdown at 2:24, and that section doesn't have a strong sense of direction. I'm beginning to really like the mellow vibe the piece has later on, but I think you could've integrated a bit better with the gritty, busier beats from earlier. Still, there's some cool instrumentation, rhythmic content, and an engaging variety of moods here. Keep at it, Galicross! ^_^