I like the mellow, jazzy feel of the piece. The sound design is pretty quirky, and the chromatic descending scales in the harmonies add a pretty unique edge to the piece. I think the piece could use a little more structuring. It has some rough transitions, and the harmonic content gets pretty repetitive after a while. You took the piece in a more interesting direction by 1:32, which did a pretty good job of hitting the piece home for such a short piece. That said, I can definitely tell that this was rushed, and I’d encourage you to take a few extra measures to add more gradual transitions and air out the pace of the piece a bit. Still, fun mood, instruments, atmosphere, and melodies here. Keep at it, Trixelbit! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
8/10

Very Jazzy and chill.
The massive sub-bass gives it a very modern feel.
Composition is intricate and captivating and gives me late-evening-cityscape-view-with-a-bottle-of-wine vibes.

Great job!

Clean