It is ok but i loved the "I love Hentai" one better
Doesn't sit well with me
To be honest it was a bit too simple and repetitive for me. Also you used that chime way too much, something like that works better as an effect rather than a foundation for rhythm. It seemed like you wanted to jam too many ideas in here. You featured a lot of instruments but there was little continuity to it besides the drum beat.
I don't intend to be harsh but this just wasn't to my liking.
Develop it a bit further, especially if you plan to use it on an EP