Love the bass on this you have sculpted a nice beat here, its an up-beat, and I like your style here very sharp and clear, I could see you adding more content on this one and making it somewhat longer, but anyways nice beat you have here.
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More content could be added to stretch it out and make it longer.
I can see the marshmellows under my feet! So great is my fantasy. Hehe, nice music, keep it up!