Truthfully, I like the other better...
But this is also good. I caught a few sour notes though, I'm sure it's intentional though. Great job!
its pretty good
i like it! its pretty good. i havent heard your other one but i really like this version! its also really clear, but i wish you gave the ending more thought then just fading
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.