This is very nice man! I really love it! I really like the melodic thing! Nice sound design, and whoah, you are improving!
I think, the composition itself is fantastic, just need to work on the transitions. You can add some small detailed effects to tie up the transitions of transitions, so that the flow would be much smoother. Add reverb to the supersynth chord to add realistic space. Also, add compressors and boost the bass, but (this is weirdly important), make a cut in EQ, that no single frequency can enter below 50hz, so that there is enough space and clarity left for the bass. Lastly, don't be afraid to make your kicks loud. Same as the snare. There is an EQ to fix distortions. A strong impact of kicks can give the song epicness as fuck!
Let's continue the collab dude!
ShockblastDeluxe 
