I like the cute synths at the beginning and the organ synths on the downbeats. There’s a nice sense of climax into :51, but the progression is a bit gradual until then. I think the snare could be a bit louder, and in fact the mix as a whole is rather quiet. The melodies are nice, but I think the texture could use more legato and/or atmospheric elements so that it sounds richer. The chord progression and risers are a bit cliche, although the structuring is pretty good. I like the re-intro at 1:55. The variations at 2:47 give the piece a good sense of climax towards the end, and I’m also really enjoying the rhythmic attributes of the piece. Overall, this is a cute and uplifting piece with some solid melodies and a clear mix. I think my main complaint here is the lack of originality, as well as the need for more harmonic variety. Keep at it, Przekrosza! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.25/10