I like the percussion at the beginning that kinda sounds like horse hoof footsteps and the sultry vocals. The chord progression is a bit cliche, and some of the synths at :25 sound a bit cheesy in a way that doesn’t necessarily fit the vibe of the vocals. I also think you could’ve used a smoother transition into :44. The arrangement of this piece is a little choppy, and it also doesn’t feel structurally complete. The snippets of vocals are the main melodic component of the track, and while I like the sound design overall, I think you could’ve used a little more structuring to give this piece some shape and contrast. Right now, it only really has one direction (towards a fuller texture, more energy, etc.), which is a bit of a risky formula for maximizing the emotional quality of your piece. Overall, nice work with the sound design, rhythmic content, atmosphere, and melodies. The composition just needed a bit more ebb and flow. Keep at it, Mrcoolisimo! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.75/10