Love your style. It's great!
best stereo mixing i've heard in a long time.
the sound that you stereo mixed sounds really cool!
Very nice. Creates the techno stereotype of some basic drums and synths right? Well, it sounds greate!
I agree with most of what the other people said...
...great for your first song. Nice melody, good semi discrete use of panning.
I like the beat too. maybe a bit repetitive but hell its your first submittion so im not complaining. I have 2 tips for you, however:
1) Don't just use the raw presets, tweak them a bit to your liking, that will usually improve the sound of it.
2) use a bit more instruments, you had what, 5? just keep in mind for future songs try to put in maybe a bass and different instruments for different melodies or just patterns altogether.
i can see you will become a good audio portal artist very soon. visit my audio page, i would like to get a review from you to see what you think about my music.
A really great song!
This is an excellent song! I really can't much more. Overall awesome.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.