I like the murky atmosphere at the beginning. I found it a bit jarring when the beat suddenly gets quieter at :10. There’s also an audible mic pop or stereo click in there. I honestly wasn’t a big fan of the snare sample, either - it sounded a bit heavy and grating compared to the atmospheric elements of the piece. The panning at :25 is a little heavy, and I would’ve liked to hear a smoother transition into :51. You did a nice job with the sound design, rhythmic elements, and harmonic content, but honestly I’m not a huge fan of how this piece is mixed. It sounds a bit too experimental with the panning and volume changes, and the progression doesn’t always have a strong sense of direction. I would’ve liked to hear some more melodic content, gradual transitions, and storytelling in this piece. I do like the instrumentation, rhythmic content, and atmosphere, and I know you’re a talented composer and producer, Rekuiem, but this just doesn’t do a lot for me. Sorry. I think you should keep working on it, though. It’s totally worth it to flesh out the composition a bit more and see if you can get the most out of this fun experimental vibe. Keep at it, Rekuiem! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
6.5/10

Very catchy main beat. And the atmospheric synths in the background add a very nice melody to everything. Loving that low bass as well.

Great track! Good luck in the competition!