I like the title.

Nuclear cycle, eh? Definitely not something I'd ever think of, so props on that :P

The beginning with the drum filters is nice, it's been done before, but the drums feel like their more IDM than anything. I can't feel a rythym at all :(

Build your songs a little faster. Add more things at once instead of slowly filtering things in, because then you'll have to write more parts to your songs, and the more parts you have in your songs the more interesting they'll be, and the more interesting they are, the better the song.

I also just realized how slow this song is. I could make a trance song at this tempo, dude. That ain't right; try making a DnB song at a faster tempo sometime. 165-180 BPM would work nicely.

So yeah, only a few things to fix up:

Pluses:
I like that little saw lead. Catchy; I could see something nice come from that little arpeggio-type melody.

Minuses:
Tempo's too slow.
Drums are too random-sounding. They need to have solid rythymic patterns that the listener can identify with.
And make the songs progress smoothly and focus on getting the most quality you can get out of a track.

Keep it easy bro;

-Zenon

eh

the slicing's good but you used a lot of presets in the fl studio demo, which is NOT GOOD

nice

this sure was and earful ..well the begining kind of bored me but the end was grreat!

what

the start sounds like white noise being poffed around

wait

the whole track sounds like that

wait here comes a something

weird lead with some kind of melody that never changes

noisepong stops, lead continues with a sligh change each time

fx and some pad

white noise

continues like that for a long time

shit bell

This song is a bit bare bones, and it's sorta- weird, almost inaudible too. You coulda addded lots more variation to it, or you could just redo it to make it sound more like an actual song than random stuff put in a song

eh maybe