I like the title.
Nuclear cycle, eh? Definitely not something I'd ever think of, so props on that :P
The beginning with the drum filters is nice, it's been done before, but the drums feel like their more IDM than anything. I can't feel a rythym at all :(
Build your songs a little faster. Add more things at once instead of slowly filtering things in, because then you'll have to write more parts to your songs, and the more parts you have in your songs the more interesting they'll be, and the more interesting they are, the better the song.
I also just realized how slow this song is. I could make a trance song at this tempo, dude. That ain't right; try making a DnB song at a faster tempo sometime. 165-180 BPM would work nicely.
So yeah, only a few things to fix up:
I like that little saw lead. Catchy; I could see something nice come from that little arpeggio-type melody.
Tempo's too slow.
Drums are too random-sounding. They need to have solid rythymic patterns that the listener can identify with.
And make the songs progress smoothly and focus on getting the most quality you can get out of a track.
Keep it easy bro;
Hey, thnx for the rev at first.
Yeah I know that DnB has to be that tempo, but when I speeded up this song, the breaks got all weird so that's the reason it's like this. I might edit this song and fix the breaks n stuff.
I like the random breaks. I prefer random that sounds cool that "arranged" drums that sound like shit.
The next DnB song will have a faster build.
Great rev, Zenon, thnx.
the slicing's good but you used a lot of presets in the fl studio demo, which is NOT GOOD
used a lot of presets and then a 5.
Not nice =(
this sure was and earful ..well the begining kind of bored me but the end was grreat!
the start sounds like white noise being poffed around
the whole track sounds like that
wait here comes a something
weird lead with some kind of melody that never changes
noisepong stops, lead continues with a sligh change each time
fx and some pad
continues like that for a long time
This song is a bit bare bones, and it's sorta- weird, almost inaudible too. You coulda addded lots more variation to it, or you could just redo it to make it sound more like an actual song than random stuff put in a song
just keep it like that.