The first part I thought was just a little too crunchy for punk, however, it was good. But I thought the lead guitar was just a tad repetitive.
The second part was pretty good, it kept me guessing what note was coming next, which I like in music. How ever, I personally think this song could have been two different audio submissions. However, it is a good submission none the less.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.