Missing one or two elements
Great start, in fact the song is fine it just needs one or two things to make it work. Some kind of melody, or another beat or I don't know, something meaty.
At the moment it's just a beat or two over the top of each other, it's a bit inconsequential. It doesn't build to anything and ends up being repetitive.
Also I thought the pacing was a bit slow.
It's a pity because honestly it's really very close to a great song, I can feel it.
this song and all others is like becuz i dont want to hear at the start
they should have lead up to a cool begining.
it was pretty boring, no melody or synth.
just sounds like the drum line to a song.
add some other stuff and it might be good. =]
-A New Decade
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