Who the hell let your backwards, alcoholic, tormented, twisted, cannibalistic ass on the dance floor?
I have a pretty hardcore taste, and this fits nicely within.
I really like the way you emphasized an almost seizure inducing climax at about :49 and :57, amongst the choppy beats and alongside the flowing melody rhythm.
No other criticism then to maybe clean the beats so the melody is a bit more cohesive -- only for a stronger impact on said climax.
cannibalistic ass climax... awesome
Oh noez, no more further ratingsD: lol
Lovely start! The beats sound awesome. The rapping in the beginning sounds really good aswell, although I cant hear what hes saying, but thats ok, that makes it even better I guess:P I love the 8-bit likeness of this song. Very experimental.
They took away the further ratings LOL!
Now what do I do? lol
Well, something bothered me about those anyway. Ill do it my own way^-^
Originality: I find it quite original. It sounds exotic in some way, mixed with a clubfeel and 8bit sounds.
Diversity: I can tell you had a lot of work on this. Although the main song could switch up a little.
Advice: Thats a hard oneO.o Im not really of this genre.. How about getting it into an echoey part with hardly any drums, where you experiment with the 8 bit sounds, like.. long notes with an attack on it. Or others where you play the notes while playing with the release knob? I dont know, but I guess youll figure out yourself:3 I hope it helped you:P
ta for the extensive review... glad u enjoyed it, maybe there'll be a finished version some day
Lovely 8-bit kinda music. Well, I really can't give you any tips how to continue it but it sounds fairly fine to me the way it is. Maybe add some more cool parts just like in fakerfucker. lol. ;D
You'll get the idea.
Anyways. You sucked the creampie first. OMG, how random. G! <3
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 5 for daffy duck, raising its score from 3.33 to 3.75.
make it a track
It sounds great and all, good stuff, you just need to shape it up a bit, put in some more structure and stuff. I constantly didn't have any idea if you looped the stuff and shit.
i hear a lot of crazy, great ideas. I guess you tried to mix a lot of sounds together, and that's where you have to improve on as well.
Many different sounds is awesome, but distribute them well. I love the melodic ideas in your pieces.
So, that was it for my constructive critisism.
Gimme some too, ped. >8(
ta, think i reviewed ur new one already (maybe only on myspack actually)...
yeh, is quite messy this, finding it really tricky to reign it in production wise tho... HEEELLP....
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.