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my first song with a real name! :P


Well then

let's celebrate the naming of your first track with a review, eh? :)

Basic dance beat with a good backgroud sound. A little overdone by other artists, but still gets the point across.

You eventually ended up changing that arp after a while so it became a bunch of random chords. Maybe have not been the best change in the history of music (same with that lead) but it was progression anyways.

Overall song arrangement. Songs are usually written in introduction -> Melody and/or verse1 ->Melody and/or verse1 -> Verse 2 and/or break and it keeps going like this until we go to the -> outro. This makes the song feel very diverse, and professional. Listen a little bit to more profound artists that do this type of genre, to get a sense of how they arrange it.

Also, your compression. In fact, there was no compression. Slap a soft clipper on the master effects just so you can keep the levels down a bit, and remember: Louder is not always better! Work to making the track quieter than usual. If you want something to stand out, turn down the other instruments. Don't turn that particular one up really high. Don't be afraid to compress things that have a tendency to peak out (i.e. Kicks, snares, leads).

Keep it up. Now, if you could be a gentleman and review my song called "Peace Brings Pain", I'd really appreciate it :)

Keep it easy;


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bibotheking responds:

thx for the review, and thx for the advice!


cool begining, it was very trancey
i like the arp
everything seems to fit, but maybe tune some stuff to get it perfect.

-A New Decade
(check out my tracks)

bibotheking responds:

thanks for your review, I appreciate it :D

Not bad

I liked it. I guess your using fruity loops right...? Well I just started using that software a few days ago. I know your fairly new as well but maybe you could give me a few pointers.

bibotheking responds:

jep, i am using FL, i will try to give you some advice, but you'll find alot advice on forums and NG, if you search for some fruityloops tutorials on NG, you will find enough to get you started.

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4.15 / 5.00

Jul 4, 2007
6:48 AM EDT
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 51 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.