Hey I love the style.
I can tell after this track your singing improved. You're squeezing in this and it csuses the flat notes. When you go higher don't use volume to reach it. Use your breath. You'll get vocal nodes for doing that too much. Also you were singing very choppy which is never good. I made that mistake as well. Also you should compress your vlcals better. I don't mean in mixing. I mean try to sing the same volume. It goes low and jumps. There wasn't really a lot of going on...and it was almost too empty. I can see what you were going for. Try adding more strings in the chorus. I think it'd be much better because it didn't do much with theine currently.