That first synth was a bit loud for me. and i hear a lot of echoing, reverbs everywhere.
the melodies are good though, don't get me wrong.
it's just they're overpowering the rest of the synths/beats.
i like how you put everything together.
love the breakdowns.
check my stuff out sometime.
Needs some change
This is a superb song, and MeastroRage's comments still stand, but i'd like to add that you should switch the synth voice over to something else at least for a short while in order to give it a bit of a rest. The melody, however, is brilliant.
I really liked this one! The reverbed synth really boomed out an epic core, and though it heavily muscled out the other sounds, it was a damn interesting melody and feel overall.
After that first breakdown, with that heavily gated synth segment. I felt that part was also incredibly epic. I could see a very fierce, fantastic air fight to this piece.
The bass synth in my opinion was a little too quiet. I understand that making it louder may have made it muscle out other instruments, but as it stands I feel it's a little heavy on the high end of the frequency range.
The percusssion beats though simple, were effective.
The ending was a tad abrupt, again I know you're not done with it yet. The last melody segment didn't really move either. I would have liked to hear some change, either through some new synth or perhaps a change in melody.
All in all, it's a great piece, I look forward to it's final version! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!