you're improving, ill give you that. keep it up!
i share Crazy-Unicorn's opinion about the chord progression after 1:44
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This is my fourth LMMS session. A "session" is a track which I create purely to obtain practice in song creation. If a session is well received, I may decide to release it as a full song. This particular song is a drum and bass track with some noise and guitar riffs. Comments are encouraged!
LMMS project file download: https://autumncheney-drive.mycozy.cloud/public?sharecode=uV36pWOOH9sQ
you're improving, ill give you that. keep it up!
i share Crazy-Unicorn's opinion about the chord progression after 1:44
Hey dude!
There are a couple of things that I don't like in this song, and I know that you do that to practice and I'm sure you've learned a lot from it :)
There is too much noise and that's very difficult to keep your ears fresh you know ? :') Especially on the high frequencies there's too much stuff going on. I think even the hihats at the start are too loud and wet. The kick feels great but it's a little too distorted to me :/ And also the chord progression going on after 1:44 feels very strange xD But that's cool in a way !
There are a couple of things that I like too !
First the snare, it sounds very good imo :D
The pad at the beginning is also a very great idea :)
Keep it up bro !
I did amplify the noise intentionally, but if people report that it is too loud, then I can tone it down. Also, I am still experimenting with drum synthesizers, so you can expect the drums to sound strange. However, thank you for the review!
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