Quite the auditory spectacle.
You have great skill in ordering the percussion instruments in such a way to leave no doubt in anyone's mind that this is a war-themed piece.
The 'pickles', as another poster put it, seem a bit out of place, but it isn't severe enough to warrant the dropping of a point from this review. 10/10, 5/5
I look forward to hearing more from you, chances are your talent won't remain undiscovered for long.