Keep this song off of FFR.
No offense, but there should be a line of how 'professional' songs should sound to be on FFR. This song crosses that line.
Lacks texture. It's out of harmony, it clips amazingly bad, and has more presets than a Dimrain song (which isn't TOO big of a deal I guess, but still). It's overall unattractive in terms of what should be on FFR.
If that sounds mean, sorry. I'm not saying the song completely 'sucks', I'm just saying it doesn't meet standards of what should be on FFR imo. With that said, if given the proper tweaks, this song good be pretty interesting. Perhaps give it some harmony, a melody possibly. More texture, effects, normal things all normal songs have. It just sounds so empty and dry. Also, the kick is really muffled; it sounds like you cut off all frequencies above like 500hz on it, it needs less bass and more punch. The hit in the back is distracting, overbearing and out of tune with the song. Your 'moog' melody doesn't follow suit with your bassline, which doesn't even follow suit with itself... :| (I suggest lo
oking up some theory lessons online or something?) Also, use a compressor to make your mix stay below 0dB so that the bass doesn't clip like hell. Add some equalization on things and etc.
That's all I can think of. I'm tired rofl. Keep practicing and you'll get better. :D
I never said it should be on FFR, I simply said that FFR is cool!
Thanks for the review anyway, I see you spent time on it!
I'm so stepping this for FFR now. Username is omgitznpv if you want to know D;