This song reminds me of the Smurfs, for some reason.
Humm. You've got some major clipping in this song. Put a compressor on this.
The song was pretty good. The melody is too faint, turn it up! I like the sound of this song. Its really good! It would be better if you fixed those things though. Nice job. Keep it up.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.