Decent composition, drum rhythms are a bit lacking (could use more dynamics) which brings me to my next point...

- Mastering + EQ is poor.
- 02:03 for example sounds amazing yet the intense section is incredibly lacking, it's too much of a "one bit is not too good" the other is amazing.

I'd recommend looking into EQ and mastering, and improving yourself further by trying out more intense sections untill you get really good at it!

Extremely excellent work on the end bit there, composition is decent although the main issue is it goes: Chill bit > culmination > chill bit that's half the length of the track, the intense bit in this case, feels out of place.

I like it though, just some things that could be improved!