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really good for an instrumental

Set some lyrics to it

I love the song, but this song needs to be more than an instrumental, it needs to have lyrics with it.

Niiice.

Bass line ftw.

I'll kill you if you turn emo. but apart from that awesome. I spose the solo could have been better though, although I imagine you've had your good time and bad times with solos.

Awesome lead back into the main riff after the solo, although usually solos are after the middle 8.

Overall: Needs more chords for electric guitar, not just simple slapping for bass.
^_^ 6/10 Re-record this please, I know you can do better and i Really Really wanna hear this advanced.

[PS] I said "I'll kill you if you turn emo because of the name, just sounds it, and dw, I wont kill you really]. ^_^

Uhm..

Until the solo, it was alright. But the solo was scratchy and with lack of better word bleagh.
The bass was kind of annoying too..

Fix the bass and the solo and this is surely an ok song.

Great But...

It was great but, the solo was horrible. All you need to do is work on that and you'll be fine. You sounded like a 6 year old, no offense. I stink at solos too, Mine sound all whimpy. Just work on the solo and then you'll be all set. The rest of the song was great, you just need a singer now!