good base, no direction, low diversity, well mixed
a very raw and chaotic core you've got here. The quick arrangement of bells and chimes really do give off a dark, hostile feel.
However this loop doesn't move at all, and offers little in terms of diversity and direction. I would have liked some deep dark percussion, perhaps a low droning brass section?
The end also cuts off too suddenly and doesn't loop effectively. I don't really see why you put that gap of silence at the end, perhaps the reverb you added did not allow for easy looping?
mastering wise, the song is good, nothing is too loud or soft.
In any case, an interesting start, holds potential, but sadly did not go anywhere. Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.