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Un-scouted beginning revised


Author Comments

Now I know a little more about remixing... and what mastering is!

On december 2018 I entered (and lost) a competition here on this site, the NGAP Bingo. At the time I was un-scouted and so my entry was titled "un-scouted beggining" (you can check it out for comparison if you're curious about it)

I'm trying new things (for me), hope that I'm improving

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I like the cute melodies at the beginning and the sound design, even if it is a little cheesy. The drums could’ve been mixed a bit louder here, although the big bass drum at :30 seems a little heavy for the overall tone of the piece. Some of the transitions in this piece are pretty sudden, notably 1:00, 1:28, and 1:04. My main problem here is that the structure is pretty flat. The energy level is a near-constant in this piece. I would’ve liked to hear either an atmospheric bridge/breakdown or a climactic section with some new melodic content at some point. Still, the mood, instruments, and melodies here are really nice. Keep at it, Tebyricat! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
Instrumentation and sound design
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
Originality and uniqueness
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
Composite score

Credits & Info


Waiting for 3 more votes

Apr 6, 2019
3:50 PM EDT
File Info
1.9 MB
2 min 3 sec

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You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:

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You may not use this work for commercial purposes. *
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*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.