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Un-scouted beginning revised

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Now I know a little more about remixing... and what mastering is!

On december 2018 I entered (and lost) a competition here on this site, the NGAP Bingo. At the time I was un-scouted and so my entry was titled "un-scouted beggining" (you can check it out for comparison if you're curious about it)

I'm trying new things (for me), hope that I'm improving

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I like the cute melodies at the beginning and the sound design, even if it is a little cheesy. The drums could’ve been mixed a bit louder here, although the big bass drum at :30 seems a little heavy for the overall tone of the piece. Some of the transitions in this piece are pretty sudden, notably 1:00, 1:28, and 1:04. My main problem here is that the structure is pretty flat. The energy level is a near-constant in this piece. I would’ve liked to hear either an atmospheric bridge/breakdown or a climactic section with some new melodic content at some point. Still, the mood, instruments, and melodies here are really nice. Keep at it, Tebyricat! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.75/10

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Waiting for 3 more votes

Uploaded
Apr 6, 2019
3:50 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
File Info
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1.9 MB
2 min 3 sec

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