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This is to say im sorry for being stupid\a jerk. Ive grown up. So yea, thats it.



I like how the song goes from a normal beat, into a full scene. It can really fit a flash's title. The only thing that really got me out was how the song ended. The song can loop, yes, but it isn't as perfect as some other songs are. How come the song didn't get that much attention?

I mean, the song's really great, although it only had about, six reviews (excluding mine), and 400 - 500 views since a year of it's release. I have no idea why great songs (like this) are left unnoticed. You have a load of potential at Audio, keep working on those tracks! Maybe someday you'll fix the song so it loops (that is, if you really want to, since a minute feels really like a loop, more then a song).

- HydraliskElite

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Pandora-Tranquil responds:

I definitely agree with the last part, and I agree with the criticism completely. I tend to leave people wanting more for fear of being repetitive. Which has always been a major flaw in my music. However as I progress, I believe I am fixing all my mistakes and making much better tracks!

And thank you for the comment about it deserving attention haha, that was nice of you.

Best. Trance. Ever.

Lets see, the music was perfect, everything is well made. And it kicks the other Trance songs in the fucking ass. Truely a masterpiece track, i hope someday to make a remix of it soon. Keep at it!

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Pandora-Tranquil responds:

Wow, thanks man. I guess I over criticize myself. This should be full length though, I feel like im letting people down who listen because I never really finish tracks (because im lazy, and usually when I have a good idea, it only lasts for half the song and I cant follow it lol).

I appreciate it!

I like it :D

Its really good, really really well done. Perhaps a better ending? But it works well. I understand what the other guy said about the speed, but tbh i think it works well as it is. Good Job 5/5

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Pandora-Tranquil responds:

thanks for listening and taking the time to review pal!

Good work

I like those metal instruments you use at the intro and the melody's are ok too.
Enough variation in this song, the rhythm isn't bad either and the drums are good too.
Nice little song you have here, i like it :)
If i should say something you have to improve on.. try to make it longer next time is the only thing i can come up with and keep on doing like this.

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Pandora-Tranquil responds:

thanks for the constructive review!
ill never touch this song again lol its just a melody I liked so I put it on here, check out Gateway!!! its a lot better than this and I made it like yesterday.

Forgive Me Pandora Tranquil

I don't average my scores, because there are intangibles that make things good or bad. This is way to slow for the style. It's head-bobby, but it's nothing special. No offense to you, I can hear the trance and I could get tranced with this. But as someone else said another 15 BPM would really give it the umph it needs.
As for the effort, you could have gone another 30 seconds of build up.

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Pandora-Tranquil responds:

Yea, I suppose I should speed it up, I think I was experimenting with this one because im trying to find the perfect tempo for an actual dance you'd hear at a club (I never do dance music).

But yea, thanks for the constructive criticism

lmao nice review title

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4.08 / 5.00

Jun 23, 2007
1:27 AM EDT
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1.1 MB
1 min 12 sec

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