You need a bit of practice.
The drum beat doesn't fit this song. I would try to add better sounding patches and a snare drum and bass drum that better compliment eachother.
As for the main synth that you used, you need to focus on having consistency, because simply you need to have something go solid throughout the song and not just be a random pattern repeated over and over.
ADD A BASSLINE. :)
Well, good effort for someone new in what your doing. Keep practicing and you'll be good to go!
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k thanks man i really appreciate when people say what i need to fix lol
this is pretty good for a beginner. It has a very psytrance feel, and some of the synths aren't bad. here's some advice: Try to give your song some sense of direction, not just random melodies and drums coming in and out. repetition can be you friend. Also, try adding more instruments so it's not quite as empty and has some atmosphere. with some practice, youll be good in no time!
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k ill give it some direction lol i just got some new synths a bass one too so yea ill check out your stuff