You need a bit of practice.
The drum beat doesn't fit this song. I would try to add better sounding patches and a snare drum and bass drum that better compliment eachother.
As for the main synth that you used, you need to focus on having consistency, because simply you need to have something go solid throughout the song and not just be a random pattern repeated over and over.
ADD A BASSLINE. :)
Well, good effort for someone new in what your doing. Keep practicing and you'll be good to go!
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