It stops short but beside that it seems to have a nice beat. Not to repeative. Make the bass a little harder. Nice play on instruments, and great overlapping try more overlapping, but it's a great trip beat.
To give you a better idea of the visual you produce.
I see an agent on an undercover assignment.
he steps out of his porsche and walks over to casino.
Once inside the casino he distracts the boss and has the agency make a distraction. Step one done, Second he goes up stairs hack the code he's almost caught by two gaurds but plays it smooth and gets the hell out.
I hope it helps and I look forward to your future works! ^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.