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Not bad! I really like the main lead in the drop, the transitions need a little bit of work, and the break after the first drop needs a little work. I like it! Nice work!

i feel like the drop lacks some impact but overall i like this :D

I love this future house style: gritty and aggressive :P Sound design and melody is pretty good but mixing and mastering wise, it needs a lot of touch-ups. Cymbals and leads are way too loud, build lacks energy, too much high frequencies, clipping everywhere. Some tips for ya:
- Get a spectrum analyzer. SPAN is a free one that every producers love to use. Use it to check your mixing if any elements is too loud.
- Use several compressors on the master, each has its own setting. There are many guides about it on the internet.
- Put a limiter at the end of your mastering chain and limit it to -0,3 dB. That should prevent most of the distortions from happening.
Anyway nice job on this, you can always learn to improve yourself along the way:D

Maybe percussion could be a tad quieter.
There could be a more defined melody, in my opinion, however it is an aggressive house style, and I know you probably went for what you were thinking.
The melody you have in here might do well an octave higher.
Well produced,
Atmosphere: 8/10.
Beat: 9/10.
Production quality: 9/10.
Melody: 7/10.
Overall Rating: 8/10.
Nice track, definitely a solid 8 out of 10, for sure.
Looking forward to hearing more from you :)
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