Hello again Shadow16nh.
I felt that this piece was far inferior to that of the other one you submitted. There was far too much clashing in this piece, dissonant and quite unpleasant in my opinion.
Like the other review, I feel a Main Menu theme should have the person hooked! Humming the tune and captivating! Also lengthier. I think the song could very much benefit from being extended.
The mix of instruments in this one is more varied then the first.
A thought just struck me. The very first two notes of this and the other song make me think of Age of Empires theme for some reason. Do you know of it? That theme consumed my SOUL for several months, despite its simplicity.
Then again that kind of opening is quite common, so whatever, I suppose that means nothing in the overall view of things.
All in all, this one was in my opinion worse then the other, but still, pretty kick ass stuff! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!