If you want some good future bass inspiration, simply look at etzergd’s recent songs. I think they could help you improve on the buffer sections, as they need just a little bit more.
It actually almost sounds like a weird form of complextro. I do not think this is what you wanted, so just look at etzer’s songs. I think they can really help you improve!
Why did the ending cut off? It doesn't seem as if this is labeled as a loop. It definitely seems like one though.
It has been a long time since I have checked on your account, glad you fixed your name!
(Wish I still used ng as much as I used to..)