If you want some good future bass inspiration, simply look at etzergd’s recent songs. I think they could help you improve on the buffer sections, as they need just a little bit more.
It actually almost sounds like a weird form of complextro. I do not think this is what you wanted, so just look at etzer’s songs. I think they can really help you improve!
Why did the ending cut off? It doesn't seem as if this is labeled as a loop. It definitely seems like one though.
It has been a long time since I have checked on your account, glad you fixed your name!
(Wish I still used ng as much as I used to..)

Like what you got so far. I agree with you on sometimes taking a break from working on a single piece for so long. It gets to a point where your ears just kinda stop caring and everything sounds muddled and then your mind starts focusing on all the details instead of taking a step back and listening to the whole.

Anyway, only suggestion I'd give is focus on the lower shelf of sounds for anything you'd want to add.