Why do so many people misread my nickname? >.<
There's only one "s", it's pawles22! :3
Hmmm, I've just noticed that I could have given more constructive feedback last time.
This time it actually sounds a lot better in my honest opinion. Not really sure why and if anything really changed, but I like this more now ^^
It's good that you didn't remove those parts, slight reworking is better than removing!
0:23-0:39 somehow sounds good now, not sure if you've changed anything or is it just me :)
In my opinion you could make 0:55 less harsh! And I would also make it a little quieter.
1:32 still seems really out of blue, that's a real change in the melody. But it's not bad, so... I guess it doesn't matter THAT much.
The 2:30+ part is a good idea! It just seems A LITTLE bit too chaotic in my opinion! :D
But of course, your opinion is the most important! Like you said, if you like some part, then keep it! The most important thing for you is to like what you create! :D