Hmm...well. I'm not sure what it is...but it doesn't sound like a chase. I think different title maybe. I was expecting something up beat and something that would make me think of a chase scene maybe. Instead, I think of something more..twilight zonish. Not too bad, could be a wee bit more original though. Keep working on it.
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