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Man, this was pretty good. You could use a good de esser over your vocals and some compression too.
I think this would sound a lot better with some less "tinny" distortion. Its almost like an AC/DC style distortion. Some beef on the distortion would really take your vocals up another notch.
All and all man, when you get a few things figured out...I'm gonna listen to you ALL THE FUCKING TIME!\m/