Seems lacking something
a drive, that edge. It says techno, but i haven't heard much techno songs that make you want to put you to sleep (no offense). The melodies do work, nice work on that, but the drums need some work, it seems like the kick is off beat. Also id use a better mic, or sample a premade vox, slice it up and use what you want, because it was all choppy and distubed the vibe of the song.
You're still trying to find your voice, this is what, like your 17th song?? and some are the same just incomplete versions. Keep on working, keep on perfecting the sound, but more importantly...FIND YOUR OWN UNIQUE SOUND THAT DISTINGUISHES YOU FROM THE REST. YOU NEED A VOICE!! make it happen. gj overall
be kind and go review my other Groove Armada, i just uploaded it, it's called like i said groove armada but it's a house mix. "Groove Armada (House Throwback 95 Club Mix)" with lyrics from Doug Lazy from his song "Let It Roll". NG cut out half the name of it. review it if you can plz. thnx.
a drive, that edge?
i don't use a drumset, i actually play the parts out manually on a 10 year old keyboard. i desperately need a drum machine. i do need a voice, but i say that i can't really make my own style without being good first.