You got a hell-of-alot better,
Can I have a few lessons?
As for improvement you got a few things,
EQ and I would also like to see some pan-left/right on certain parts
But on an other note your imagery skills are flawless so keep it up
PS ya coulda sent it to me for EQ adjustment, I may not have the comp skills of you but I am a fairly good sound tech. At least thats what I've been told.
You need to know how to EQ it, maybe lower the bass? Cuz the bazz is too high, and you need to brting out that "Bam!" Feel. But I like it anyways, it has a nice feel behind it. Talk to me on AIM (armymenis12) .
Yeah, this was the unfinished version, I accidently uploaded the unrendered and finished file... lol, Although I truly appreciate your thoughts! -TJH