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Aisle (Never) See You Again

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UPDATE (March 4, 2019):

- Fixed the chorus so that it's not as off in the last few lines
- Minor pitch correction adjustment to the first sung note
- Denoised a couple of parts

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This is my entry for FEB NAC 2019. What better way for our fighting lovers to feud off than in a supermarket, a place filled to the brim with potential puns?

This project was basically a whole week's worth of songwriting, arranging and recording. It was exhausting, but overall, very fun (and also a great way to spend reading break :P).

Lyrics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uO9MV52M3RPZQyfKY6v_Ow7KLH6pZGk4fjEQ-C_Tpc0/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks to Tpcool for providing the male vocals, contributing the deli verse and making the cover art. <3

Made in FL Studio 20 with soundfonts (SGMv2 and Ken Ardency drums), 3xOSC and ORG waves.

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Good job Random-storykeeper. The composition sounds a little empty at times but it's undeniably good still. I can tell a lot of work went into making this, nice melodies! The piano seems a little cookie-cutter but I do like how it helps make the song feel like a play. To be fair I'm not a big fan of the puns but I can appreciate the fact that you're trying to tell a story. The voice acting is good and I like the character interaction. It all feels like a live performance to me and that's pretty nice. I'm not a big fan of the mix however. The vocals get a little overwhelming, audibly compressing the rest of the song. The vocals also sound like they were recorded with different microphones because they're mixed a little differently and it would have been nice if you played with the panning on both characters. The 8-bit synths were a nice addition to the song, somewhat odd for this setting but for some reason it all worked out.

Haha, this is cute! I love all the corny puns... very clever! I can tell a lot of time and effort was poured into this. The vocals are a bit rough in meter with both male and female vocals fighting to work together at certain parts and the pitch was a bit off, but it kinda goes with the cheese factor. The lyrics kind of make up for this. This reminds me of those love story musicals with a dance number. Overall, very good work, just polish up the vocals, and you have a top-notch tune! 4/5

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Tpcool
Vocals

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Feb 22, 2019
3:12 AM EST
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5.9 MB
6 min 26 sec

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