Good job Random-storykeeper. The composition sounds a little empty at times but it's undeniably good still. I can tell a lot of work went into making this, nice melodies! The piano seems a little cookie-cutter but I do like how it helps make the song feel like a play. To be fair I'm not a big fan of the puns but I can appreciate the fact that you're trying to tell a story. The voice acting is good and I like the character interaction. It all feels like a live performance to me and that's pretty nice. I'm not a big fan of the mix however. The vocals get a little overwhelming, audibly compressing the rest of the song. The vocals also sound like they were recorded with different microphones because they're mixed a little differently and it would have been nice if you played with the panning on both characters. The 8-bit synths were a nice addition to the song, somewhat odd for this setting but for some reason it all worked out.