i dont know what a concerto is either, nor do i care. this is pretty good but not outstanding. but keep it up. :)
That was really good! And don't listen to what other people say about whether or not you know "proper" music terminology. You can still write songs better than they can. Keep on keeping on!
do you even know what a concerto is?
The song's ok, you've got talent, but it really just didn't click with me.