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Ocean Eyes

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Wrote this song for the Cheesy Love song competition. It is very cheesy, enjoy.

I lost you for a while there
I lost you and fell flat
But ive grown into my soul alright
And its all because of that

You were absent for a while there
I was wasted in a trance
But ive learned more than ive lost
And i get a second chance

Ocean eyes, i am lost in thee
I am a ship, and i swear that youre the sea
this red arrow points, to anywhere you are
And i’ll drift forever to your heart

You told me i was worth it all
A risk that you could take
I took your words for granted
And i made a great mistake

Id scour through eternity
To replace your fearsome soul
And time would be no problem
Youre the embers on my coal

Ocean eyes, i am lost in thee
I am a ship, and i swear that youre the sea
this red arrow points, to anywhere you are
And i’ll drift forever to your heart

Ocean eyes, i am lost in thee
I am a ship, and i swear that youre the sea
this red arrow points, to anywhere you are
And i’ll drift forever to your heart

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This is quite the wonderful song tydiggy! It's very rare to find songs here on Newgrounds that are sung with such raw emotion. And sure, the guitar playing wasn't completely perfect with a few buzzes and a few muted strings here and there but the presentation couldn't be more perfect. The reverb almost gives me the impression you're live on stage. The lyrics are sappy but serious enough to be acceptable. There's a raw 90's indie b-side appeal about everything and I love it. This is the kind of cheese I was hoping for this contest.

tydiggy responds:

Thanks for listening and reviewing :) yeah, honestly I'm a singer first and guitar player second, so Im just passable haha. Also using my phone to record in one take is definitely not helping #poormusicianproblems. Thanks for your honesty review and kind words, I hope I can impress you more in the future.

This is a beautifully crafted song! The only thing I could find room for improvement is maybe this could have been a tad more cheesy because I could have easily mistaken this as a serious love song. Other than that, this is a damn good tune! Very well done, Ty! 5/5

loving the acoustic vibe!

Very 90s love song feeling :P

I am definitely digging the corny lyrics

some point sounded a tad muffled guitar wise but I think that's just me being nitpicky - this is pretty damn good. I will give it a 5 :)

-shawn (Chronamut)-

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tydiggy
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4.76 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 18, 2019
6:30 PM EST
Genre
Indie
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9.4 MB
4 min 7 sec

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